The Irresistible Urge to try to fix a broken thing (ch20)

The Irresistible Lure of Trying to Fix a Broken Thing

Am in bed, but have just been slogging away at the ransom note scene of chapter 20 to make it work properly, after all the thought I’ve been putting it. This, after four rounds of rewrite, is at last getting there. Will tomorrow start looking through the later chapters, where I expect similar changes to be needed.

Usual place.

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